this week we have been writing recounts and we were looking at success criteria using two metaphors's and two similes.
I hope you enjoy my recount.
Jizsiah’s Birthday
Mum, me, my brother and my stepdad said, “Hello Jizsiah, happy birthday!” excitedly as we gave our present to him. My stepdad is a kind angel. After he opened his present we made a cake and more yummy food. Then we went to go and stick the decorations on the walls. The decorations sparkled like sequins. Then we went out to go and get my nana, went back home and waited for my step dad.
Do you like cake? My step dad had come then we had some cake and some yummy, yummy food. When we finished the yummy food we sat down to watch some movies. Then then it was time to take my nana home.
Broom broom!! The car started . We drove to go shopping and we got some new clothes for Jizsiah. Back home we went to go and change Jizsiah. He looked so cool like a spy in his suit and we all said,” Awww! So cute.” Then Jizsiah had a sleep and we had a rest from a big, big day- Jizsiah’s birthday.
Here is Jizsiah
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