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Autumn Cameo

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly. Use careful spelling and sounding out

WINTER

Winter blows its cold icy breath everywhere.

The early morning frost is crunchy and white covering the green grass.

The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,

covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.

The trees become bare, brown bones standing like statues admiring the view.

Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.

Chilly bitterness in the air, winter is here.

Here is my writing

Autumn - DRAFT The wend blowd the levs swesh! The . wend blowd of the levs then it was there yers lata then they got crachea. and crachea like a old grama onec it was one yers it was all green. ya it is green now thes levs are beter then the old crachhay ones thaso wer to crachay and old.

Autumn - Published

Swish! The wind blows the leaves. The wind blows the leaves from the trees.  It was three years later. The leaves got crunchier and crinklier like an old grandma. Some trees are all green. Yay! It is green now. These leaves are better than the old crunchier ones. Autumn leaves are too crunchy and old.