Te Ahuahu Walk

Ring ring! The bell rang. The bus stopped. Beep beep. Yay! We are going to Te Ahu Ahu. “Yipee! finally we are climbing the mountain today,” my cousin yelled. I could not wait.

I saw the big mountain. We started to climb. I felt tired. My legs were tired. I saw crickets jumping around the place. I heard the crickets sing. I saw spiders crawling everywhere. I heard people talking. I saw the big pond. The view was amazing.

Here is my writing about Te Ahuahu mountain walk. We were focusing on powerful verbs and appropriate adjectives. I think my writing is cool.