Maths

For maths I have been working in a small group. We have been learning different strategies to help us solve problems.

hand writing

This is my term 2 hand writing sample. My next goal is to make sure my writing is the right size.

I can type words 7 per minute.

Maori

I have been learning the Maori word for fish, shark, crab and dolphin.  I need more practise at remembering the Maori names for the creatures.

Narrative Writing

We are learning about the parts of a narrative. Here is a story I wrote about a dinosaur.

The Vicious Dinosaur

Once there lived a vicious dinosaur in a dark, damp, cold forest. The dinosaur stomped and stomped all the way to  the freezing blue river. There were two men soldiers in a little wooden boat fishing for their dinner. Their names were Paddy and Chad.

“Yummm! They look yummy,” said the dinosaur. The dinosaur stepped into the murky brown water. Suddenly the dinosaur was sinking in the muddy water. The dinosaur roared. “HA HA!” said Paddy and Chad.

Paddy and Chad paddled all the way back to their dusty old house and lived happily ever after. The dinosaur died all alone in the river.

By Cassidy

Visual pepeha

                          I like the way I did my work

Here is my pepeha. I have worked hard to learn it and say the words properly.

Autumn Cameo

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly. Use careful spelling and sounding out

WINTER

Winter blows its cold icy breath everywhere.

The early morning frost is crunchy and white covering the green grass.

The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,

covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.

The trees become bare, brown bones standing like statues admiring the view.

Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.

Chilly bitterness in the air, winter is here.

Here is my writing

Autumn - DRAFT The wend blowd the levs swesh! The . wend blowd of the levs then it was there yers lata then they got crachea. and crachea like a old grama onec it was one yers it was all green. ya it is green now thes levs are beter then the old crachhay ones thaso wer to crachay and old.

Autumn - Published

Swish! The wind blows the leaves. The wind blows the leaves from the trees.  It was three years later. The leaves got crunchier and crinklier like an old grandma. Some trees are all green. Yay! It is green now. These leaves are better than the old crunchier ones. Autumn leaves are too crunchy and old.